Test Screening Feedback

MCCAT

• Media Language (A)

• Conventions (B)

• Creativity (A)

• Attention to Detail (B)

• Technical Proficiency (A)

Positive comments

• Cinematography
  
  The POV shot was very creative as well as being good. A variety of shots were good as well as the re-use of shots. Excellent editing, additionally the use of a blurry shot was well thought out.

• Mise-en -scene
  
  The setting was good. The use of props was very good; the cocaine, suit and ring were excellent.

• Lighting
  
  There were good effects such as the use of lighting.

• Sound
  
  The parallel music was used to great effect, also it suited the genre, scene and was a good choice overall.

• Conventions
  
  The mise-en-scene suited the genre, where by the audience can relate to it.

Constructive Criticism

• Cinematography
  
  We received no criticism.

• Mise-en-scene
  
  More gangster conventions needed.

• Lighting
  
  The lighting was too dull, perhaps dark lighting would have suited the scene better.

• Sound
  
  We received no criticism.

• Conventions
  
  We received no criticism
  
  

Suggestions and Ideas

• What else would you (or the target audience) like to see in this production?
  
  The shots could be longer.

• Suggestions for post-production/editing
  
  We received no comments within this section.
  
  
  
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